Wednesday, 1 June 2016

Will he save her

It was a hot and sunny day in Australia a girl named Mary was working as a teacher. Her working time was 9:00am - 3:00pm. One day she was exhausted from working so hard Mary was walking home from work well it was still daylight. 

A insane scientist came out of nowhere and took her and she passed out. She was so surprised when she woke up she was in a room full of chemicals , microscopes and magnifying glasses. She said “ What are you doing to me’’ then he said I am Max the scientist. But the one thing Mary didn’t notice was that Max was an insane scientist. He took her to Mt Kosciuszko. 

A super hero named Superman had a bad feeling about Mt Kosciuszko so he flew there. Before Superman arrived at Mt Kosciuszko they were already at the top. Mary screamed for help but none heard her accept superman. Max pushed Mary off the mountain. Mary screamed because she was about to die. Superman flew as fast as he could to save Mary.


He saved Mary in time because she nearly hit the ground. Furthermore she said “who are you’’ he said I am “Superman’’. She thanked superman so much. A few minutes after that she said wow Superman look at your muscles. To be continued. He will continue saving the world from evil people in the next story.



 Walt: write a narrative that is descriptive (paints a picture in the reader's mind)

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