Rewriting a song

Here you can see that I have tried my best to rewrite a song into my own lyrics it's not that great bug I tried. When I had to rewrite the song it had to be about fitness, the song I chose was all about that bass.


Because you know I'm all about that bass
'Bout that bass, no treble
I'm all about that bass
'Bout that bass, no treble
Because you know I'm all about that bass
'Bout that bass, no treble I’m all about my weight bout my brain brain brain
Yeah, it's pretty clear, I ain't no size two
But I can shake it, shake it, like I'm supposed to do
'Cause I got that boom boom that all the boys chase
And all the right junk in all the right places

 

My version

Because you know I’m all about my weight and my brain no trouble

Because you know I’m all about my weight and my brain no trouble

Because you know I’m all about my weight and my brain no trouble I’m all about my weight and my brain brain brain brain

Yeah it’s pretty clear I need to concentrate so 

I can stay straight too and not go over weight

Cause I go them zumba moves that everyone can chase 

It can help with my mental state and also my heart rate.