This is a record of my time at Pt England School in Auckland, New Zealand.
Hi ShealesGreat character descriptions. I think that your second description of the elderly couple could have been better though. Maybe a description of how they looked e.g white hair, wrinkles etc.
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Hi Sheales
ReplyDeleteGreat character descriptions. I think that your second description of the elderly couple could have been better though. Maybe a description of how they looked e.g white hair, wrinkles etc.