Behind the door

On a beautiful and bright sunny day their was these 2 little girls name Rachael and Emily, they were walking quietly through the forest minding their only business. When they came upon a house with a door that looked like it was haunted.

They happened to look through the windows but it was dark. They knocked on the door. But none answered. Then the door just suddenly opened. It gave them a little fright but they walked in. As they walked in in the house smelt like candy but it was still dark and they couldn’t see anything. Out of the blues candles started lighting up and it was a weird looking old lady.

  

 She tied up Rachel to her oven and put Emily in this cage. The witch said to Rachel ‘‘turn on the oven really hot’’. With no questions asked Rachel did what she said. Next the witch was forcing Emily to eat candy, but she refused to eat it. After she refused to eat it she grabbed Rachel and was putting a knife to her throat. Rachel grabbed a pan and whacked the witch, the witch stumbled back.

Rachael then grabbed a knife and cut herself free. She set Emily free. After that they put the witch in the oven and said ‘‘is it hot enough for you now’’. Furthermore the witch burned to death, well Rachel and Emily Escaped and never returned. Years later they grew up, and they were adults. As they were growing up they were telling them some of their tips about witches.

Tip 1 never walk into a house the looks haunted , and if you walk and you smell candy run far away. 3 days later in a town their sheriff was trying to arrest a innocent lady claiming she was a witch. But then Rachel and Emily was passing through and told him to live her alone, he didn’t listen so Emily Grabbed the lady. She told the sheriff that if you harm her again you’ll be sorry.

Moreover they were walking through the desert when the say this weird look manchien, they went to go check it out and it was a witch she thought she could escape. They kept hunting for witches so that people weren’t endanger. People called them heroes and they really appreciated it. They Never went to that house when they were little again, they called that place the MYSTERY BEHIND THE DOOR. The reason for that name was they didn’t know what was behind the door. THE END

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This is my practise narrative.

My Artwork & Narrative

As you can see I have created a artwork for extension. I also wrote a narrative to go with it. Here is my narrative.

                                      My Warrior Narrative.

There was once a beautiful young princess warrior called Siale who lived in a village in the Pacific. Even though she was a princess, she would always protect her village from danger. She was so brave that she would even fight people who were much larger and stronger. Her best features were her loyalty and strength. Siale lived in a beautiful village that was isolated from other villages. It was located near the sea so that the villagers could easily collect and catch food.

One day Siale was talking to her siblings when suddenly out of the blue she had a strange feeling. She dashed to her fale telling her family ‘‘I have a really a strange feeling that something is about to happen’’. Next she told the guards to go to the look out. Afterwards they thought that they had seen nothing, but then they had another look and they saw what they thought were their worst enemies coming towards them.

The guards quickly called out for help and everyone was worried.  Siale's mouth felt dry and her hands became sweaty as soon as she saw her worst enemies entering her village. Terrified, she had nothing to say or do, except face them.  The guards and men from the village were ready to fight.

Everyone stood still waiting for the battle to begin. Then a powerful looking warrior came to the front. Siale looked in shock as she realised that it was her long lost brother. They were going to have a battle but they didn’t. Instead they just shook hands and then hugged. Siale couldn’t believe what had just happened. Now it was time for the village to celebrate.

My Warrior Narrative

There was once a beautiful young princess warrior called Siale who lived in a village in the Pacific. Even though she was a princess, she would always protect her village from danger. She was so brave that she would even fight people who were much larger and stronger. Her best features were her loyalty and strength. Siale lived in a beautiful village that was isolated from other villages. It was located near the sea so that the villagers could easily collect and catch food.

One day Siale was talking to her siblings when suddenly out of the blue she had a strange feeling. She dashed to her fale telling her family ‘‘I have a really a strange feeling that something is about to happen’’. Next she told the guards to go to the look out. Afterwards they thought that they had seen nothing, but then they had another look and they saw what they thought were their worst enemies coming towards them.

The guards quickly called out for help and everyone was worried.  Siale's mouth felt dry and her hands became sweaty as soon as she saw her worst enemies entering her village. Terrified, she had nothing to say or do, except face them.  The guards and men from the village were ready to fight.

Everyone stood still waiting for the battle to begin. Then a powerful looking warrior came to the front. Siale looked in shock as she realised that it was her long lost brother. They were going to have a battle but they didn’t. Instead they just shook hands and then hugged. Siale couldn’t believe what had just happened. Now it was time for the village to celebrate.

My Narrative Writing

My NARRATIVE WRITING

In 1844 on a Friday Afternoon at 2pm  Taranaki,  Everest,  Pihanga and Ngauruhoe were fighting in G.I. They were fighting over the place called Maungarei in Panmure Auckland. Mt Taranaki meet Mt Pihanga  in wellington because they heard Everest talking about a place called maungarei that none owned. So then Taranaki,  Everest and Mt Pihanga were arguing over Maungarei.


Taranaki,Everest and Pihanga were all saying I’ll have Maungarei ,  I’ll have Maungarei. Then ngauruhoe came and said ‘‘I will have it’’. Furthermore Taranaki and them said excuse me where did you come from. Moreover ngauruhoe ‘‘said it doesn’t matter where I came from I am going to claim that place’’. After ngauruhoe said that, they all started arguing. When they did stop arguing they started fighting and then maungarei came and said ‘‘none is claiming that place cause it’s mine’’.

Taranaki, Everest, Pihanga, Ngauruhoe and Maungarei Started hitting each other. Maungarei dad came and said I will pick who takes the place Maungarei. He said ‘‘it will be my son Maungarei taking that place’’. Then is was settled. Taranaki, Everest, Pihanga, and Ngauruhoe left and didn’t return. 

Maungarei dad asked if he could turn him into a mountain. The next day a man saw Maungarei the mountain and he  started walking up the mountain when he reached the top he saw a plate which said Maungarei. He was thinking of calling an English name so, he did call it an English name which is called Mt Wellington...

Walt: plan a narrative text, thinking carefully about who 

we are writing for and why?